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theEdge poster design by FlightOfGrey theEdge poster design by FlightOfGrey
This is my first actual art submission to this site, so far I have only uploaded ps brushes. ANYWAY!

I made this for a school art project, we are yet to receive our marks. Would love to hear what you think of it.

Anyway, thanks for checking it out, please leave comments, I will comment you back on some of you work in exchange. I just want to know what I could improve on, as this is my first project using photoshop.
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RuzzeLRoxy Featured By Owner May 4, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
wow! So cool! ♥
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Microequinox Featured By Owner Feb 15, 2010
So, Ben, I heard/saw you were stealing work from your NCEA level 2 poster? Or should I say, USING THE VERY ONE YOU SUBMITTED.
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doubtingthomas Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2010  Hobbyist
I agree with the previous commenter that the writing at the bottom seems a little out of place and minimal, but everything above it is very good. I'd suggest just a block of small text with plenty of information down the bottom, something akin to all the text that goes on a compact disc "because it has to", rather than trying to make it part of the flow of the image.
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kendravixie Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2010  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Very colorful.

Text flows very well through the centre.

Text at the bottom seems a little awkward, and could contain a little more information about the band?group?mix?

If someone didn't know what The Edge was, I would assume that it was just classical jazz (where actually it could be jazz trip hop, jazz house, etc). Maybe have a brief description of the music style in faded white letters running through the color above the text "cd out now."
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FlightOfGrey Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2010
Wow, thanks for your great response!

It was only for a school project as mentioned so is all fake, but what you said about the more information would have been good. I especially like the idea with the faded writing.

Will now have to check out your gallery in return!
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chris16 Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2009
I like it, it flows very well :D
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